Mirror, Mirror on the wall;
Who’s the fairest of them all?
Alas, you are no talking mirror,
To hear you speak as I come near.
Yet, I seek for you, for my reflection.
With hopes for reduced affliction.
Who is that woman staring back?
With eyes as dark as the colour black?
Does she really look like me?
Please say something and set me free
Mirror, Mirror on the wall;
For once spare me the bitter truth
And lie to me with your falsifying words.
Carve the best lie for me to believe.
Tell me that the woman in the mirror,
Looks nothing like me.
Tell me I’m taller than her.
Tell me I’m fairer than her.
And my eyes, a sparkly emerald green.
Make me believe with your lie so clean.
Mirror, Mirror on the fine, fine wall;
Am I really that woman on the wall?
No you are not my dear
lady;
I show only the
physical reflection.
If only I could show
you your inner-self,
As that’s where your
real beauty lies within.
You are fairer than
the woman on the wall.
Your eye, sparks with a knowledge so sheen,
It would put any man
down on his knee.
But yet, you come to
me asking for a lie;
I can lie a lie that
will set you free.
But the truth is
stronger than a lie can ever be.
So would you stop
craving for more
And start believing yourself from here-fore?
Written for The Mag 110
If only mirrors could really speak...
ReplyDeleteSplendid..!!
ReplyDeleteI love this line- 'But the truth is stronger than a lie can ever be'.
Loved it through out.
I second your thought that good deed is the only thing that we need to gain real beauty.
Superb :) :)
Thanks a lot Prasoon, appreciate it :)
DeleteSo good. Nice thought.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteAMAZING WORK DONE!
ReplyDeletelove your poem and yeah, goodness is what matters =)
Thank you Raphael, glad you liked it :)
Deleteamazing.. But the whole point of it makes the mirror needless in the real life. True work though..
ReplyDeleteThank you mithil
DeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteLoved it gal!
Mirror mirror on the fine fine wall,
Am I really that woman on the wall !!
SO thought provoking words!
Keep writing!
Thanks a lot for your feedback Kinara :)
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thanx. keep it up
sometimes the mirror is the only one that understands
ReplyDeletemirrored
Really nice composition!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tarang :)
DeleteVery nice and beautifully portrayed the reality of life... loved it
ReplyDeleteCheers
Dawn
Thank you Dawn.
DeleteA good story that needs to be told over and over to some of these girls that have problems with self image.
ReplyDeleteI agree. I keep telling myself this too most of the times!!
DeleteBrilliant poem, thank you so much for sharing with us all. So much truth in it
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback :)
DeleteSo true... The real beauty lies inside you. Let it shine through! Love it!
ReplyDeleteIt's so true that true beauty lies within. If you feel beautiful inside, you will shine that beauty outside.
ReplyDeleteSomeday Somewhere - Hope