June 03, 2012

Shooting Star


eyes gazed the night sky
in search of a shooting star
will my dreams come true?

impish stars twinkled
told me stories of lost dreams,
spread through the night sky

fear shook my belief
uncertainties engulfed-
dreams, locked forever

but all is not lost...
caught a shooting star at last
new hope, brought a smile




75 comments:

  1. haha nice :)
    Twinkle twinkle shooting star...

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  2. This is BEAUTIFUL! =)
    I loved the end, hope..
    x

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  3. Picture and Haiku go well together. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  4. Awesome series of haiku Neha. Very well done, loved the short story these four haiku make. Thank you for being part of "Tackle It Tuesday".

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  5. Can only hope.. what happens further is not in our hand :) Nice.

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  6. Wish on a shooting star, lovely take o prompt :)

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  7. I like your presentation. As soon as i opened the page, I loved all the colors. Enjoyed the haiku too :))

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    1. Thanks so much for the lovely comment ghazala :)

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  8. Dear Neha,

    Absolutely astounded by the poetic depth and creative brilliance...!!So refreshing...

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  9. Shooting star bring you luck and happiness!,.lovely piece of poetry :)

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  10. beautiful...loved the last line especially...lifted my heart toward the heavens.

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    1. I'm glad it did Laura. Thank you.

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  11. Very nice!! Like the way you effortlessly weaved the two prompts.

    Flaming Locks

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  12. Lovely thoughts on the shooting star ~ Nice one ~

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  13. This is a novel encapsulated. Each stanza moves the story to the next phase. Informative, captivating, introduction of conflict and resolution. Nice.

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    1. Thank you for the lovely feedback, Kim :)

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  14. lovely....................

    bless u.

    anu

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  15. I found them all vey nice enjoyed being here.. RS:)

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  16. lovely...
    http://rajnishonline.blogspot.in/

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  17. Hope, hope and hope. However difficult it may seem. :)

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  18. lovely lovely poem!! beautifully written!

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  19. this is really nice neha :) well written :)

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  20. I want to learn the art of writing Haiku. The last verse is lovely!

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    1. Yes you should definitely write a haiku Saru, you have a gift for writing fabulous poems :) and thank you :)

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  21. Beautiful lines, Neha. It ends on a positive note.
    You're from Mysore, I see. I love the city. Lived there for 5 years.

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    1. Thanks Nambiar. And glad to hear you lived in Mysore too :)

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  22. Wow.. that was beautifully written. Such a short and sweet poem.
    Impish stars twinkled
    Told me stories of lost dreams! – That was just brilliant.

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    1. Thanks Raj for the lovely feedback :)

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  23. Very very beautiful set of haiku...
    M a sucker wen it comes to night skies and stars and wishes and dreams...! ;)
    Loved the way u wrote it... :)
    Flavors of experience!

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    1. Thanks Pranita, glad you liked it :)

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  24. Marvelous set of haiku ~ with wonderful message ~ thanks, ^_^ ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  25. The last line is an emblem of hope and optimism...good work :-)

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  26. Its funny how something like a shooting star can bring us a ray of hope. Nice. :)

    I'd really like it if you could visit my blog too.http://theseasonedwoman.blogspot.in/
    Maybe we could follow each other. :)

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