June 03, 2012

Shooting Star


eyes gazed the night sky
in search of a shooting star
will my dreams come true?

impish stars twinkled
told me stories of lost dreams,
spread through the night sky

fear shook my belief
uncertainties engulfed-
dreams, locked forever

but all is not lost...
caught a shooting star at last
new hope, brought a smile




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70 comments:

  1. DJune 3, 2012 at 1:53 PM

    haha nice :)
    Twinkle twinkle shooting star...

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  2. Nirati June 3, 2012 at 2:00 PM

    This is BEAUTIFUL! =)
    I loved the end, hope..
    x

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  3. SuzyJune 3, 2012 at 2:57 PM

    Picture and Haiku go well together. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleJune 3, 2012 at 4:37 PM

    Awesome series of haiku Neha. Very well done, loved the short story these four haiku make. Thank you for being part of "Tackle It Tuesday".

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  5. Tarang SinhaJune 3, 2012 at 5:11 PM

    Lovely set of haiku!:)

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  6. carol l mckennaJune 3, 2012 at 6:27 PM

    Ah ~ so lovely ~ thanks, ^_^

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  7. Vinay Leo R.June 3, 2012 at 6:31 PM

    Can only hope.. what happens further is not in our hand :) Nice.

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  8. magiceyeJune 3, 2012 at 6:37 PM

    love the positive thought!

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  9. NAWALJune 3, 2012 at 6:53 PM

    Wish on a shooting star, lovely take o prompt :)

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  10. UnknownJune 3, 2012 at 6:58 PM

    I like your presentation. As soon as i opened the page, I loved all the colors. Enjoyed the haiku too :))

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    1. NehaJune 3, 2012 at 8:52 PM

      Thanks so much for the lovely comment ghazala :)

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  11. NehaJune 3, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    Thank you :)

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  12. PanchaliJune 3, 2012 at 9:46 PM

    Dear Neha,

    Absolutely astounded by the poetic depth and creative brilliance...!!So refreshing...

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  13. Jaideep RaoJune 3, 2012 at 11:12 PM

    Shooting star bring you luck and happiness!,.lovely piece of poetry :)

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  14. LauraJune 4, 2012 at 2:48 AM

    beautiful...loved the last line especially...lifted my heart toward the heavens.

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  15. AnonymousJune 4, 2012 at 2:49 AM

    Very nice!! Like the way you effortlessly weaved the two prompts.

    Flaming Locks

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  16. GraceJune 4, 2012 at 2:58 AM

    Lovely thoughts on the shooting star ~ Nice one ~

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  17. UnknownJune 4, 2012 at 8:36 AM

    This is a novel encapsulated. Each stanza moves the story to the next phase. Informative, captivating, introduction of conflict and resolution. Nice.

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    1. NehaJune 4, 2012 at 11:33 AM

      Thank you for the lovely feedback, Kim :)

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  18. ANULATA RAJ NAIRJune 4, 2012 at 11:02 AM

    lovely....................

    bless u.

    anu

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  19. Ramesh SoodJune 4, 2012 at 3:14 PM

    I found them all vey nice enjoyed being here.. RS:)

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  20. RajnishJune 4, 2012 at 6:21 PM

    lovely...
    http://rajnishonline.blogspot.in/

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  21. Purple MistJune 4, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    Beautiful!

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  22. UnknownJune 4, 2012 at 9:43 PM

    lovely :)

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  23. Stephanie ScarpaJune 4, 2012 at 10:27 PM

    Lovely written, I dream myself away!

    Love
    /S / http:// mydarlingsolitude.blogspot.com
    ♥

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  24. AmberJune 5, 2012 at 12:39 AM

    Hope, hope and hope. However difficult it may seem. :)

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  25. KBJune 5, 2012 at 4:23 AM

    Beautiful.

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  26. RohiniJune 5, 2012 at 11:41 AM

    LOVELY!! :)

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  27. debajyotiJune 5, 2012 at 4:03 PM

    lovely lovely poem!! beautifully written!

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  28. Sri ValliJune 5, 2012 at 4:57 PM

    Very beautiful poem :)

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  29. AshJune 5, 2012 at 7:43 PM

    this is really nice neha :) well written :)

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  30. TTTJune 5, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    lovely !!!

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  31. Saru SinghalJune 6, 2012 at 6:20 AM

    I want to learn the art of writing Haiku. The last verse is lovely!

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    1. NehaJune 8, 2012 at 9:14 AM

      Yes you should definitely write a haiku Saru, you have a gift for writing fabulous poems :) and thank you :)

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  32. D.NambiarJune 7, 2012 at 6:10 AM

    Beautiful lines, Neha. It ends on a positive note.
    You're from Mysore, I see. I love the city. Lived there for 5 years.

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    1. NehaJune 8, 2012 at 9:15 AM

      Thanks Nambiar. And glad to hear you lived in Mysore too :)

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  33. RajJune 7, 2012 at 8:05 AM

    Wow.. that was beautifully written. Such a short and sweet poem.
    Impish stars twinkled
    Told me stories of lost dreams! – That was just brilliant.

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  34. PranitaJune 8, 2012 at 2:49 PM

    Very very beautiful set of haiku...
    M a sucker wen it comes to night skies and stars and wishes and dreams...! ;)
    Loved the way u wrote it... :)
    Flavors of experience!

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  35. carol l mckennaJune 9, 2012 at 6:13 AM

    Marvelous set of haiku ~ with wonderful message ~ thanks, ^_^ ~ (A Creative Harbor)

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  36. SreejaJune 13, 2012 at 10:28 AM

    beautiful!

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  37. Amrit SinhaJune 18, 2012 at 5:56 PM

    The last line is an emblem of hope and optimism...good work :-)

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  38. Diksha SharmaJanuary 13, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    Its funny how something like a shooting star can bring us a ray of hope. Nice. :)

    I'd really like it if you could visit my blog too.http://theseasonedwoman.blogspot.in/
    Maybe we could follow each other. :)

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