December 03, 2011

Haiku on Space


Space between the light,
Could be my shadowy past.
Waves push me forth.



16 comments:

  1. space between the light is a very important concept in art

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  2. You captured the mood of the illustration very well.Thank you for following me.

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  3. This is wonderful.. realisation.. go with the waves of time.. be a part of flow.. enjoy.. thanks! I enjoyed being here..

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  4. @zongrik, I second your opinion.

    @Rinkly Rimes, Thank you and its my pleasure:)

    @Ramesh Sood, Thank you very much.

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  5. Beautiful haiku. I especially love the second line "Could be my shadowy past."

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  6. @ The Write Girl, Thank you for reading my post, and that line came to me suddenly and I felt it fits the picture well.

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  7. @ beccagivens, thanks again.

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  8. this was wow :) loved the image and the haiku

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  9. I wonder what kind of light u are referring to? The one that comes from the sun, forming a shadow? …ur haiku is nice….thought pondering…so I interpret it as that very space where ur body and the light come together to form a shadow, that shadow….holds the haunting or may be even beautiful memories of the past...and then I feel as if u want to stand...but waves push you...to move on.....:)

    PS: Ur blog in a real sense welcomes the winters, beautiful snowflakes dropping by to say "hello December!!":)

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  10. @Aakrithi, You spoke my mind :). That's exactly what I mean by my haiku, Shadowy past preferably refers to so previous haunting and ya waves direct me to move on to the future.

    Thank you for visiting my snowflake-filled blog:)

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  11. Greetings:

    how are you today?

    great big thanks for your support and attention to poets rally,
    hope to see you share any time around the year…

    stay blessed, your talent rocks.
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

    xoxox

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  12. love your Haiku,

    Excellent writing…
    Happy Holidays….
    I know you write stunning Haiku, welcome sharing with us,
    1 to 3 or more are welcome.
    no theme.
    Hope to see you in,
    Smiles!

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