December 11, 2011

My Knight Forever



“Where are you taking me?”
Curiously, she tried to peek,
From behind the blindfold.
“Patience my love, you’ll soon see”
He let the blindfold fall.
There they stood,
Middle of a giant chessboard.
Surrounded by the majestic,
Black and white pawns.
“This is beautiful”, she sighed
“If only I knew how to play...”
“You’ll soon learn from me” he smiled
“But on one condition...”
He knelt down and held out his hand;
“Will you be my queen forever?”
She folded her arms and spoke;
“No, I shan’t!”
His devastated look made her happy.
She had found her true love at last.
Reaching down to him,
She whispered in his ear;
“Will you honour my heart,
And be my forever knight?”

Written for: One Single Impression Prompt 198: Knight
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18 comments:

  1. shailDecember 11, 2011 at 12:16 PM

    That's romantic :)

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  2. Ramesh SoodDecember 11, 2011 at 7:24 PM

    A lovely poem.. I think we both had similar thoughts...having chess as the background to our words.. Neha, you write very well.. thanks..for honouring me..

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  3. sarath unnithanDecember 11, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    Nice...short & sweet :)

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  4. AnonymousDecember 11, 2011 at 11:38 PM

    You just won yourself a new fan! I love this! I am following you now! :) Hugs!
    Kellie

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  5. The PoetDecember 12, 2011 at 3:15 AM

    Hello.
    I love the tender romance in this.
    The power & magic of love knows no bounds.
    Awesome imagery & great take on the prompt!
    Thanks for sharing.

    For ref:
    Eleven Roses And You

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  6. MarieDecember 12, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    Adorable and romantic. Very wonderful visual.

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  7. NehaDecember 12, 2011 at 7:06 PM

    @shail, @ramesh @sharath, thank you so much for the comments :)
    @kellie, i'm flattered :)thank you so much for following my blog :)
    @Andy, thank you :)
    @Marie, thank you very much :)

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  8. Susie ClevengerDecember 13, 2011 at 5:42 AM

    A beautiful visual of the game of love

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  9. AmityDecember 13, 2011 at 1:25 PM

    A very romantic game Neha...:)
    I suddenly feel wanting my knight to appear and snatch me to neverland...:)

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  10. VebyDecember 13, 2011 at 2:25 PM

    WOW!!!!! Jus "WOW"!
    You, your imaginations, your creations eveything simply Superb!!

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  11. D2December 14, 2011 at 3:18 PM

    Lovely poem. I like how you showed the lady's femininity.
    :)

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  12. NehaDecember 15, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    Thank you Amity, That's every girl's dream ;) :)

    Thank you Susie :)

    @Veby, wow, thanks for the appreciation :)

    @D2, you are very observant, thank you :)

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  13. AnasDecember 15, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    This is awesome. Loved that chess board :)

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  14. LeoPawApril 1, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    Lovely. I hope something special like this happens in my game of chess.

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    1. NehaApril 1, 2012 at 11:50 PM

      Thanks Leo. And best wishes from my side that something unravels in your game of chess soon :) ;)

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  15. MALKANGIRI RAVI KUMARApril 2, 2012 at 6:11 AM

    Good one-mixing game of chess&love

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  16. debajyotiApril 4, 2012 at 12:01 AM

    nice one. loved it :)

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