The ocean calls from beyond.
Little boat, with its long oars,
Ready to be taken for a sail;
As they await you by the shore.
It’s upon you to mount this boat,
Leave behind this so called life.
Come aboard, the ocean calls to you,
To escape from life’s piercing knives.
Your life so far, a grieving symphony.
You deserve another chance at recovery.
Come aboard, the ocean calls to you.
Your future waits, sail ahead to rediscover.
The ocean swoons you from beyond.
Free yourself from the bonds of fear and shackle.
For it is time to start, a journey afresh.
Oh, to be young again, is indeed a life’s miracle.
P.S: A second chance at rediscovering one's life, could be anyone's dream.
Shared with: Magpie Tales - Mag 95
Your PS is too tragic for most of us bear but we all do it at least a little!
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful. The ocean calls indeed, and the call must be heeded.
ReplyDeleteA miracle indeed. Lovely, Neha!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! This had such an inviting tone. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully written!
ReplyDelete@Catfish Tales, I'm glad this is of convincing material :)
ReplyDelete@Stafford Ray, I didn't meant it to be tragic sir. But you can't deny everyone thinks of redemption at one time or the other.
@mary, @insanebloom, @Laura, @Umesh; thank you for the comments and the visit :)
Hello.
ReplyDeleteThought-provoking piece & powerful imagery.
Very nicely done!
Thanks for sharing.
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Great imagery in this one, Neha. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful. I love your positive vision.
ReplyDeleteI shall grab the oars and row with you..beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteNicely written. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeletei hear the call and i am heading it....nice write...
ReplyDeleteNeha this is beautiful and full of truth! :-)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and the promise of a better tomorrow is enticing.
ReplyDeleteThank you for joining Poets United. I have added your blog to our blogroll so others can discover you and your wonderful poetry. Poets United is what you make of it so explore, comment often and it will lead to folks doing so in return. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading your poetry.
ReplyDeleteInk runs from the corners of my mouth
There is no happiness like mine.
I have been eating poetry.
~Mark Strand
I love the last stanza - it provides the reader/dreamer inspiration to accept its invitation! Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your feedbacks. Made my day!! :) Andy, Doctor FTSE, thingy, Susie, eflores, Brian Miller, Carrie Brutt and Rek
ReplyDelete@Mark Strand, thank you for the add :)
@becca givens, thank you. I was trying to inspire myself with some words from my own mind.
of all :) i loved the P;S - veryyyyyyyyy much!
ReplyDeleteThanks Deeee :)
Deletelovely last line..:) You write well...
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Bhavana :) :)
Deletewell written poem..:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Deepz :)
Deletevery well written Neha :)
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